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Post by emceethunder on Jun 18, 2007 18:04:41 GMT -5
This is one of my deepest poems right here, Enjoy. ------------------------------------------------------ As they fall from the stars They leave trails of shine behind They fall so fast, they fall so far Pain leaking from the depths of your mind Allow my words, into your soul Let my love warm your heart Give me a chance to make you whole If I can't give you love, I can give you hope Please, no more crying, fight away them fears Cause without you, is how I dissappear I would Go through hell, to relinquish your Tears.
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Post by Rara Avis on Jun 18, 2007 18:07:23 GMT -5
hmmm not bad my friend. it's good. keep posting the deep work
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Post by prodigypaulk on Jul 2, 2007 21:14:43 GMT -5
Damn good one....I had to read it a couple times to understand that so double kudos.....
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Post by emceethunder on Jul 3, 2007 18:53:46 GMT -5
Thanks Alot.
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