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Jul 6, 2007 22:47:36 GMT -5
Post by Rara Avis on Jul 6, 2007 22:47:36 GMT -5
The life, the brains, the wisdom, the love All those deceased along with the blood The sun should choose never to shine Over something so trivial as what is our time Something so full of hatred it cannot be explained So full of contempt that it cannot be contained The belly of beast i see is where we live Eaten out, chewed out, a woman could try to survive However it seems, though we may not see, a life in the making The problem is, whether we see now or not, a life, also for the taking Hatred breeds contempt, contempt breeds violence, violence breeds nothing A vicious circle that never completes, fore it never accomplishes anything good And nothing that gets accomplished, is worth the death, nothing is worth what cannot be understood You see the lack of the moral structure, a void, apparently dropping into the abyss A world, little good, and what is good, is only hit and miss If you aim for the greatness, you fall up short. That is the nature, and cause for the witty retorts That does nothing but continue this circle of hate, contempt, and nothingness And that's why the eyes, watching for the care, are just nothing but sunken-ness.
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Jul 7, 2007 12:27:13 GMT -5
Post by Rara Avis on Jul 7, 2007 12:27:13 GMT -5
bumpppp
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Post by Rara Avis on Jul 8, 2007 0:39:24 GMT -5
gah...bump..........again
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Jul 8, 2007 23:26:58 GMT -5
Post by emceethunder on Jul 8, 2007 23:26:58 GMT -5
Its cool, a lil shaky in the beginning, but the content was strong, and although it was overall good, it seemed, rushed.
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Jul 8, 2007 23:31:52 GMT -5
Post by Rara Avis on Jul 8, 2007 23:31:52 GMT -5
i was talking to you when i wrote it. i wasn't feeling al there. remember?
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Jul 12, 2007 13:16:52 GMT -5
Post by emceethunder on Jul 12, 2007 13:16:52 GMT -5
yeah i do.
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