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Post by Rara Avis on Dec 13, 2006 18:23:55 GMT -5
Do you see that little boy that grew up wanting to live the American Dream His college scholarships all gone because he became a dope fiend All his life ahead of him with money and cars Now all he can do is shoot up and look at the stars Needles by the bed Blunts on the pillow by his head His one time thing now controls his life Because of his addiction, he lost his song and his wife He strives to stay alive Gettin' mixed up with some bad people and drive by's He's got clothes of every size that he got at the charity house He's got less of a house than a mouse To earn more money he becomes a yay pusher In the game of life he's slowly becoming the loser Pushed to the wrong people and got a stun gun to the chest This time he got lucky and didn't have to be laid to rest He got sentenced for pushing drugs Camera flashin' his mugs Now he's spendin' ten years with rapist, killers, thugs Could've been a baseball player, but now the prison got him cleanin' rugs
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Post by Rara Avis on Jan 12, 2007 23:23:16 GMT -5
Ain't anyone gonna responds to my older poems lol
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Post by prodigypaulk on Jan 13, 2007 10:37:06 GMT -5
Good poem man, keep it up..........
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Post by emceethunder on Jan 14, 2007 2:20:10 GMT -5
What a way 2 define such a lie...
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Post by Mystical on Jan 17, 2007 18:08:18 GMT -5
lol what
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Post by Rara Avis on Jan 17, 2007 20:03:06 GMT -5
eh...what. i think he was making fun of my poem. not cool man
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Post by emceethunder on Jan 28, 2007 18:46:08 GMT -5
Naw, THE AMERICAN DREAM is a lie, like what prodigy once said;
"-They want you to live that dream...that American Dream/ Its just one thing; ITS ONLY A DREAM"
Naw, id never make fun of your stuff, i think its cool, keep it up
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Post by Rara Avis on Feb 10, 2007 12:32:24 GMT -5
OOO I get it now. The American Dream is a lie, but what I wrote simply defined that lie...I get it.
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