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Post by The Don on Jul 20, 2007 6:42:26 GMT -5
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Post by mymphisgold101 on Jul 20, 2007 16:32:40 GMT -5
The Don was vastly superior. IMO. His punches remind me of an actual battle rap. I love it and I hope I get my turn at you Don.
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Post by cheddar on Jul 20, 2007 20:52:36 GMT -5
"Call yourself The Don but you aint organizing crimes, you usually only drop the news, since when you utilizing rhymes?"
no strong punch there
"im comin with pulverizin lines, to terrorize your mind, first rounds an easy win, this title will be mine,"
no punch there either, but youve got good rhymes going
"go back to postin articles, im spittin fire, that burns holes through your clothin articles,"
decent, but again theres not really anything there
"my flows remarkable, yours is a dead flame, everyone knows im out your league, im just playin head games."
you didnt have hard punches and nothing great as far as wordplay, metaphors, etc., but you had a decent flow and strong rhymes.
"A label at your age? Shit, you aint even old enough to have-a-car, But Crackhouse? Shits a misnomer, only “white” you handle’s in your av-a-tar *"
pretty good, going personal already, creative
"I’m reminiscent of Chris Wallace way I stick you up and take-ya-cash Then take over from his nigga Gutta, and make sure ya girl “make-a-splash” **"
not a great bar but you made a decent reference
"I’m Takin first place on the battle food chain, last-go-to-you-dawg Cos binary bullets be blastin, glas-gow-to-new-yawk"
kinda weak
"I’m comin From the UK, so I don’t Mobb, but I Roll Deep-though *** Leave you on your knees beggin like a cheap street-hoe"
not bad, not great
"Make u Pay the price for not watchin ya girl, cos u should never trust a slick-slut Cos while you sittin at her counter writin, I be upstairs… getting a quick-nut ****"
this is a great bar, you got personal, multi, punch...
"Then Take yo label down one by one,first your white, then merdeurous d’s paler-ass, tryna act like shady but yall are stuck in his past… as trailer-trash"
pretty good, creative
vote=the don
stronger punches, personals, and a good flow.
revo has good rhymes but there wasnt enough to them
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Post by Rara Avis on Jul 20, 2007 21:02:31 GMT -5
well...i'm hoping this counts as an actual vote. I agree with everything Cheddar said. I can't make it sound any better, so therefore see no need to rewrite it.
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Post by alter on Jul 21, 2007 11:13:24 GMT -5
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Post by versatai on Jul 21, 2007 22:46:21 GMT -5
I'm gonna go ahead and close this one off. Revo was pretty weak, and hardly as creative. Much of his shit was filler that didn't really link to anything else. The Don wasn't fantastic, but at least he was on the offensive. This was a pretty easy one to vote on, and Revo had a chance to take this, but he didnt capitalize. Vote to The Don
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Post by The Don on Jul 22, 2007 6:15:36 GMT -5
omgz pwned.
Don wins
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Post by alter on Jul 22, 2007 11:37:07 GMT -5
lolz @ pwnt
calm donw kiddo
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Post by Uprise on Jul 22, 2007 13:49:41 GMT -5
i could of came alot better, thats what i get for trying to half ass it, good job Don
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