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Post by The Don on Jul 25, 2007 7:21:01 GMT -5
Make sure you read the RULES: The Mann drops first, don’t drop until both battlers have checked in. Both Verses are due in 96 hours, that’s 1PM GMT on Sunday 29th July. If you don’t know what that is in your local time, check Here
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alter
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Post by alter on Jul 25, 2007 11:24:19 GMT -5
cheque please... i'm here fo' ya' monehs foo'
lol
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Post by The MaNN on Jul 26, 2007 17:34:55 GMT -5
check my brotha
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alter
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Post by alter on Jul 28, 2007 15:34:09 GMT -5
can i get a deadline extension or something.. cas unless u drop in a and hour or something.. i wont be home till like.... 12pm 2mo... so basically monday...
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Post by The Don on Jul 28, 2007 22:23:53 GMT -5
yeh sure. hell, i might need one too, i been mad busy recently, cousins are up from london, and i barely had any time myself to think. nice little challenge though
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Post by The MaNN on Jul 29, 2007 4:08:07 GMT -5
can i get a deadline extension or something.. cas unless u drop in a and hour or something.. i wont be home till like.... 12pm 2mo... so basically monday... I needed 1 too. I had to help my dad fix up our kitchen for the past few days. I should have my drop tomorrow.
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alter
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Post by alter on Jul 29, 2007 16:14:40 GMT -5
works for me.. unless you want another 2 no shows.. which would kinda suck... anyways i'll drop 2mo if that's cool... i have (literally) over 100 web pages to go through now (HHE, a few other rap sites, manga, anime, other boards etc) before i contemplate dropping. lol
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Post by The MaNN on Jul 30, 2007 1:05:12 GMT -5
Sry it took me so long I been busy.
_________________________________________________ You think you a lyricist? Please you overrated. Plus you rhyme like the guy Brittney Spears dated
I'm the Ali of the rap game you not a contender If you was smart you would know that you gotta surrender
I can tell that you fruity, your avatar proves it Did you tell your parents? I'm sure they don't approve it
You only here cuz your opponent didn't show up Beating you is easy its like taking a lay up
And I ain't playin games this ain't no playstation Why your rhymes so bad is your brain on vacation
And dont try to back out now you aint excused Ain't it sad I havent touched you but you still got abused
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alter
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Post by alter on Jul 30, 2007 10:31:39 GMT -5
quick free man.. gotta go check my emails and shi
look, realise this.. my spits be unbelievable feats, i'll smash this pussy, so, thingy, ya knees' still weak cas the mann can keep me down online, cas here there's freedom in speech//
feelin the keys? yup, cas face it the battle was over by that last bar i'm down shiftin on dude, like riggin races in nascar, digits placed where the caps are//
dude should see the facts are you gettin blazed faster then aged rasta's, so sit in place cas i'm rippin face kid, in fact this shit is waste, cas i ain't seen stretch bars like that since prison breaks//
this kid'll break, comin with the same shit, check ya avy, fuck food, we pourin liquor where ya name is can i suggest, if you don't want such shit rhymes then this time don't spit lines outta ya fairy anus//
fuck this gay shit, like blah blah blah, blah blah blah blah blah wow i'm still fistin this pussy with that filler shit though it was a hand out//
ya rhymes jus don't stand out, makin me actually spit? you a nuisance b cas no one's seeing the man when you aint even bin through puberty//
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sorry... omd... damn.... i really couldnt be bothered lol.. you can see cas half of that shit is like fuckin slant rhymes and i reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaly couldn't be bothered, so yeah
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alter
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Post by alter on Jul 30, 2007 10:41:23 GMT -5
just a s quick expos down shit = shifting down a gear.. eg. slowing down.. in other words, that shit was half assed like a mule if you can't guess that "The Man" = as in the guy who keeps black folks down.. he's opressive, and gets beat by freedom of speech stretch bars = this kinda shit where it's over forced.. and stretched bars as in to open them... fisting pussy/hand out... pretty obvious nuisance = you guys must realise how lazy i am.. and how buch i couldnt be bothered to spit here...
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