Uprise
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Post by Uprise on May 27, 2007 18:40:36 GMT -5
Im torn between an emotion and whats real i keep it bottled up is it really pain i feel? these feelings keep me stuck im trapped in this state of mind i look in the broken mirror but the face i find isnt mine i feel as if there is no trust ive met noone that truly cares ive encountered words and twisted verbs but no actions stronger than stares relations and romances thats life in its happy moments bricks for the future loves a prime component the minutes keep on ticking as the good times quickly pass and my hopes and joys are smashed dreams are crashed and over disheartened i fall apart, off again and on again, im back to where start
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Ayce
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Post by Ayce on May 27, 2007 21:23:56 GMT -5
i like it
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Post by Rara Avis on May 28, 2007 15:35:21 GMT -5
now that's some good poetry. i like poetry because it doesn't follow the rules of hip hop. but this was good man.
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Uprise
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Post by Uprise on May 28, 2007 15:37:57 GMT -5
thanks,
i guess you were right man, writing is coming a little easier.
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Post by Rara Avis on May 28, 2007 15:58:29 GMT -5
Yup. Writing comes easier when you take a break to gather your thoughts.
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Post by hurrikane on Jun 20, 2007 15:43:38 GMT -5
LOL i never do that.. I probly wrote uh. Nothing? Soz i got a life x]
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Post by Rara Avis on Jun 20, 2007 18:54:54 GMT -5
...wow...you never do that...which shows why you suck. you don't write, yet you think you're better than us...man, if this was my board, i'd delete your post.
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Post by emceethunder on Jun 20, 2007 21:01:04 GMT -5
Lol, No need to get hostile, we know hes suck, but we know he wont last long with that attitude, and 2Pac wrote poetry Hurrikane, did he not have a life?
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Uprise
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Post by Uprise on Jun 20, 2007 23:37:02 GMT -5
wow Hurrikane may have my vote for most annoying on this board =P
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Post by The Don on Jun 21, 2007 5:54:38 GMT -5
hurrikane= legend on this board. i mean, who else could rhyme rappin with crappin and call themself the underdog?
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Post by FoKuZ on Jun 21, 2007 11:02:09 GMT -5
And who else but a legendary figure would vote themselves? Only ones of legendary status, Im sure
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Post by Rara Avis on Jun 21, 2007 13:36:34 GMT -5
lmao.
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Post by The MaNN on Jun 21, 2007 14:26:01 GMT -5
I actually find hurrikanes post humorous for some reason. Probably because of the bad grammar and lack of sense lol.
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Mystical
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Post by Mystical on Jun 24, 2007 0:04:59 GMT -5
wow he does speak like ozzy osborn
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Post by Rara Avis on Jun 24, 2007 20:49:18 GMT -5
nooo...Ozzy's too cool to be disgraced...lets go with Bob Dylan
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