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Post by cheddar on Jan 26, 2008 16:34:37 GMT -5
16 bars...Ill post mine in like 10 min.
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Post by cheddar on Jan 26, 2008 16:49:31 GMT -5
SB youre lit to flames, bitch SB is shit for brains, Most people go puberty, THEN death, you just skipped a frame.
Look, I don’t care who you “bit off”, youre still witless, And whos “head” you want in your mouth is your business,
Childbirth is beautiful, with yours the exception, But the real question’s how your mom gave your dad an erection,
Its a miracle, Im sure you wonder how it was done, Your dad reached into the sewer and he pulled out a son,
SB’s participation is good, so with alliteration respect him, Your -shit sucks so strongly semen- came out ya rectum,*
I know, it’s a diversion and I keep goin off topic, But I could cop lines from Bonney this shit‘s so ‘in the pocket’,
These words that Im choosin to use, I feel like they’re wasted, On a pussy that uses a douche to wash his own face with,
I have you use ya tongue to clean my impaling knife, To take you out ya misery, ‘40 days and nights’ is more like your daily life,**
Im killin alla ya fam, so hope your mom don’t get raped again… put her so far ‘down the wood’ she’ll never wanna eat ‘stake’ again,***
You leave outta hear man, I am the illest fiend, Or Ill make you ‘head off’ like youre stuck in a guillotine,
Someone film this for evidence, I aint murder this one, His skulls full of holes but I aint even pulled out a gun,
Lyrical assassin, it an overused phrase, But your death lets just say was an overdue phase,
Yo, don’t even push me dog, you better mellow out, You best get ‘the message’ like grandmaster spelled it out,
Im on edge, but you just on crack, laced with verbal denial, But not high, cuz the ‘crack’ you on is the vertical smile,
Youll start off just kinda bad, but then it just snow balls, You nervous with no calls, on a river that froze off,
And gave a snow job to your balls till they froze off, So now your stuck up ‘a river ‘with no flow’ and no balls’.
*alliteration is starting a string of words with the same letter **40 days and 40 nights is a movie about a guy who is celibate for 40 days ***suggesting that rape may be a cause for his birth, and the next line could be sexual or violent, it has two meanings
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Post by Rara Avis on Jan 26, 2008 20:52:39 GMT -5
Dude...I don't think he'll respond. He's hardly EVER on this site anymore because he doesn't have internet
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Post by cheddar on Jan 26, 2008 21:51:10 GMT -5
Dude...I don't think he'll respond. He's hardly EVER on this site anymore because he doesn't have internet Nah he sent me a PM sayin I could go ahead and post and hed respond when he had time.
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Post by Rara Avis on Jan 26, 2008 23:43:25 GMT -5
Well, that's pretty good. Although, S.B is a killer man
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Post by Steven Edward on Feb 5, 2008 10:44:22 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300] Five one you must be feelin like a class act runnin through rappers thats still learnin how to grasp rap/
All things that rise must fall nasdaq I pull ya strings & ya card nigga thats that/
Hard as leatha repertoire as sharp as eva All the things that are far from cheddar/
I uplift spreadin my love of hip-hop Wacthin insecure scrubs pretendin that they shits hot/
couldn't mob like big so he bit pac just stop what eva you got it's just not/
Right for the fee you fight like a she postin on the boards why don't you like me?/
Might be cause he likes lil wanye Dicks come only 2nd place to his mouth because of my name/
I flow just a lil too much to make it rain Make a drain for stupid shit tryna make a name/ [/glow] [glow=yellow,2,300]My bad it took so long I just got a ps3 in the mist of things & I went Crazy But i'm bac 2 what I consider to be sane. ;D Oh and besides that you guys should know this we've come with a grading system I've been payin attention 2 whats been goin on as far as how you guys been judging battles their's not that much structure so this is how battles will be judged by 4 parts that make up 4 Quarters and 4 each part the most you can get is 25 and the least is 0 so after you figure what each battler should get for what part you add them up I don't think I need to say this but I will the most you can get wit all parts added is 100 the least bein 0 the pollin system is still to be used this method of grading is to only help you know what should be graded for battles to be won so here they are Originality: 0-25 Flow: 0-25 Lyrics: 0-25 Swagger: 0-25 All this is based off of what can be graded as far as Text battles. [/glow] [/b] [/size]
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Post by Steven Edward on Feb 5, 2008 11:12:15 GMT -5
Oh and cheddar you posted 32 bars that's like two 16's
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Post by cheddar on Feb 5, 2008 18:23:30 GMT -5
Oh and cheddar you posted 32 bars that's like two 16's nah, I posted 16 bars you posted 8.
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Post by Steven Edward on Feb 5, 2008 22:06:35 GMT -5
son a bar is 4 beats if U need proof then spit ur shit 2 a beat its simple 4 4 measure by that alone I know thats 32 bars.
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Post by cheddar on Feb 6, 2008 15:29:29 GMT -5
Fair enough, but everywhere Ive seen people refer to a couplet as a bar. Simple misunderstanding.
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