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Post by Rara Avis on Mar 16, 2008 19:10:28 GMT -5
In between the day and night is the time I lay my head The twilight zone covers the hemisphere, Sky glows orange and red Like the flame I use to show you who I am With the stars in the sky Dotting it like the pupils of children No wind to blow the trees During this time of year, the ground is blanketed in leaves The twilight zone is the feet, descriptions next describe the knees The strongest beauty lies furthest from the head Due in part that the world is God’s bed The desert is the knees, dry and cracked However, it keeps the mobility entirely intact Hot and burning, no life worth living can stand Demand rises high for the people’s outcry Moisturizes the tundra, bringing the cold The torso houses the heart, cold and frigid Artic air flows through the veins, arctic and lipid No care for you but your cries help to flip it It helps to keep the cold heart beating But the arms reach out to those harmed and fleeting So that the warmth comes back before the meeting The head is ugly with eyes of lightning The mind destroying the world with fighting No compassion, no ration, but will keep the youth blasting The religions fasting, and wars everlasting But the head and torso are gone Leaving only the feet and arms God has allowed the demons to die Leaving love and no harm The world I envision will change in due time But if you do your part, I, in turn, will do mine
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Post by drzeke on Mar 17, 2008 15:51:13 GMT -5
I like this one a lot. It's got a good feel to it, less dark than the last one you posted. Besides that it has a certain inspiring aspect to it...
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Post by Rara Avis on Mar 17, 2008 17:44:19 GMT -5
yea. The majority of my new stuff stays the way I've been writing (Dark and real aspects of life) but also add the inspiring "Hold Your Head Up" attitude.
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Post by Steven Edward on Mar 19, 2008 7:33:25 GMT -5
At first I was like what the hell are you talkin about but as I went on I took to understanding at least in my way I see you startin to use more metaphors This was cool I think I gotta be in the right mood for this.
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