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Post by The Don on Jul 31, 2007 18:23:19 GMT -5
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Post by The MaNN on Aug 1, 2007 12:56:32 GMT -5
Vote on this ppl so we can get this tournament rollin
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Post by cheddar on Aug 1, 2007 18:11:27 GMT -5
ill get to this either late tonight or ill try to get to it tomorrow morning, a little busy today.
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Uprise
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Post by Uprise on Aug 1, 2007 23:51:46 GMT -5
idk, i think Mann had him, i just thought the rhymes were better and i found a stronger flow.
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Post by emceethunder on Aug 2, 2007 2:38:14 GMT -5
Revo said it all. i find it sad that this is like, the only poll for round 2.
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alter
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Post by alter on Aug 2, 2007 8:06:22 GMT -5
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lol
care to explain a litlle more.. i know i made a mule verse.. but... battles are bout punches and personals.... and though i feel cetrain dudes elevating (Revo in particular)... hmmm..
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Post by cheddar on Aug 2, 2007 8:58:57 GMT -5
The Mann:
"You think you a lyricist? Please you overrated. Plus you rhyme like the guy Brittney Spears dated"
everyone makes the k fed jokes...
"I'm the Ali of the rap game you not a contender If you was smart you would know that you gotta surrender"
there wasnt a strong punch on this bar
"I can tell that you fruity, your avatar proves it Did you tell your parents? I'm sure they don't approve it"
decent, but not great
"You only here cuz your opponent didn't show up Beating you is easy its like taking a lay up"
this is a terrible bar
"And I ain't playin games this ain't no playstation Why your rhymes so bad is your brain on vacation"
another decent one
"And dont try to back out now you aint excused Ain't it sad I havent touched you but you still got abused"
good bar
alter: "look, realise this.. my spits be unbelievable feats, i'll smash this pussy, so, thingy, ya knees' still weak cas the mann can keep me down online, cas here there's freedom in speech//"
1st line wasnt good, 2nd line didnt make sense.
"feelin the keys? yup, cas face it the battle was over by that last bar i'm down shiftin on dude, like riggin races in nascar, digits placed where the caps are//"
good flow, not a strong punch
"dude should see the facts are you gettin blazed faster then aged rasta's, so sit in place cas i'm rippin face kid, in fact this shit is waste, cas i ain't seen stretch bars like that since prison breaks//"
good bar
"this kid'll break, comin with the same shit, check ya avy, fuck food, we pourin liquor where ya name is can i suggest, if you don't want such shit rhymes then this time don't spit lines outta ya fairy anus//"
i didnt like this bar, but it was decent
"fuck this gay shit, like blah blah blah, blah blah blah blah blah wow i'm still fistin this pussy with that filler shit though it was a hand out//"
the whole first line was filler, followed by an easily rhymed word...weak bar
"ya rhymes jus don't stand out, makin me actually spit? you a nuisance b cas no one's seeing the man when you aint even bin through puberty//"
puberty jokes are old...
Flow: the mann Punches: alter Multies: alter Wordplay: alter Creativity: alter Personals: the mann Overrall: alter
vote=alter
neither of you were that good, but i give alter the edge for better punches and wordplay.
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alter
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Post by alter on Aug 2, 2007 9:33:55 GMT -5
cheddar: my spits be unbelievable feats, i'll smash this pussy, so, thingy, ya knees' still weak cas the mann can keep me down online, cas here there's freedom in speech//" pussy = thingy... when a girl reaches climax.. them knees'll go weak "the man is keepin the black man down" is a well known phrase. it relates to them conspiracy theories and how the Man clamps down on freedom of speechuck this gay shit, like blah blah blah, blah blah blah blah blah wow i'm still fistin this pussy with that filler shit though it was a hand out// duh.. lol.. that's what the bar was sayin.. i gave dude a filler (hand out) bar, to even shit up... lolya rhymes jus don't stand out, makin me actually spit? you a nuisance b cas no one's seeing the man when you aint even bin through puberty/ word on the puberty.. it's only there cas it's a extended mata on "the man". but yeah.. what can i say.. mule verse
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Post by cheddar on Aug 2, 2007 10:03:02 GMT -5
cheddar: my spits be unbelievable feats, i'll smash this pussy, so, thingy, ya knees' still weak cas the mann can keep me down online, cas here there's freedom in speech//" pussy = thingy... when a girl reaches climax.. them knees'll go weak "the man is keepin the black man down" is a well known phrase. it relates to them conspiracy theories and how the Man clamps down on freedom of speech 1st line still wasnt good, and the 2nd line still doesnt make sense...I get the man thing but youre saying he can control you because of freedom of speech? i laughed when i read it, but it still doesnt change what i said. i think you wouldve been better off without it, although you do get points for creativity.
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alter
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Post by alter on Aug 2, 2007 12:20:42 GMT -5
lol it's a typo, i just noticed it should say "can't" lol
yeah i know it wass weak
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Post by iKrazE on Aug 2, 2007 13:48:27 GMT -5
my vote would be altar but does he not get disqualified for flipping about the avatar?
Alter killed him imo....
Themann used stupid stuff used over and over and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover and oover again
Like k-fed joke and Ali(stuff about boxing)..... its boring to read...
Altars punches killed themann's
i REALLY liked the way this flowed (no point to this i just thott id mention i love the way it flowed/sounded when i read it) can i suggest, if you don't want such shit rhymes then this time don't spit lines
if alter doesnt win this theres sumtin wrong....
had to modify this and add more props to you alter......
ANOTHER SICK FLOW PART dude should see the facts are you gettin blazed faster then aged rasta's
i knew you were good but i started to doubt ya when you wouldnt battle anyone.... now i know you are as good as i first thott heh
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Post by iKrazE on Aug 2, 2007 14:01:18 GMT -5
idk, i think Mann had him, i just thought the rhymes were better and i found a stronger flow. do you know how to read revo.......?
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Post by cheddar on Aug 2, 2007 14:13:43 GMT -5
lol it's a typo, i just noticed it should say "can't" lol o wow i shouldve been able to figure that out lol...I seriously read it like 5 times trying to make sense out of it.
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alter
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Post by alter on Aug 2, 2007 14:57:30 GMT -5
LOL dw that was my bad
and thanks for the props ikraze, but you overdoing it man.. it really wasnt that good
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Post by versatai on Aug 2, 2007 17:41:37 GMT -5
i gotta hand this one to alter. the mann was kinda all over the place, and was hella played out. didnt really feel on the offensive. alter had the punches down, and yeah, parts of it were weak, but i understand the reason for a few of them. not as great as i expected it to be, but its not as close as everyone thinks it is
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Uprise
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Post by Uprise on Aug 2, 2007 18:54:45 GMT -5
idk, i think Mann had him, i just thought the rhymes were better and i found a stronger flow. do you know how to read revo.......? im quite capable of reading thanks, and im sorry im up alters ass as much as you. Sorry for stating my opinion Ikraze.
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Post by Steven Edward on Aug 2, 2007 18:57:14 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]The Mann has my vote He got straight to the point his was more on the level of exposing things you could check 4 ya self as far as skills or like the avatar line or the fact that alters here cuz dude didn't show his was just blunt stood out and was visual it had me interested. shit it was funny[/glow] Plus I agree with revo flow was stronger [glow=red,2,300] While alters was straight nothin caught my eye like from what he said I can tell focus wasn't there like that it was almost like he was dissin him in a round about way thats why didn't care for it nothin was like oo or aw for me while the same can be said 4 the Mann's but his was funny though. [/glow]
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iKrazE
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Post by iKrazE on Aug 4, 2007 19:49:18 GMT -5
i think you mean ur not up revos ass as much as me not the same as me.... anyways.... im not up his ass.... i just started to doubt him when he wouldnt battle anyone.... and i thott those 2 lines flowed well..... the manns was no where near as good imo.... and i dont thinks alters is the best iv ever seen just nice to see him spit somethin thats quite good compared to the rest of the battles in this tourny
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alter
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Post by alter on Aug 4, 2007 20:03:39 GMT -5
lol thanks and all.. but all i really care about is sOMEONE going to r2
i don't care if i lose lol. it jus want this shit to move forward...
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Post by The MaNN on Aug 4, 2007 21:37:05 GMT -5
lol thanks and all.. but all i really care about is sOMEONE going to r2 i don't care if i lose lol. it jus want this shit to move forward... I feel the same way man. If you haven't voted yet please do.
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Post by The MaNN on Aug 6, 2007 3:12:05 GMT -5
umm.... VOTE!!!!!
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Post by The Don on Aug 6, 2007 8:08:26 GMT -5
il vote in a sec
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Post by The Don on Aug 6, 2007 11:53:14 GMT -5
Flow: mann's wasnt bad, but ALTER gets it Punches: manns were weak, ALTER again Multies: mann had none, so ALTER Wordplay: again, ALTER by far Creativity: ALTER Personals: werent many, ALTER gets it Overrall: ALTER
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Post by The Don on Aug 9, 2007 20:44:10 GMT -5
vote up people...
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Post by The MaNN on Aug 12, 2007 17:06:47 GMT -5
Im gonna put this link on the front page so somebody votes....
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